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Two stars in the heavens
Twinkling so bright
Bewildered by
Each others light.

They're feelings grow
Their love comes strong
They shine together
Forever long.

When one fades
The other cries
When that one sobs
The other dies.

It was made to last
It will, it must
They'll stay together
With faith, and trust.

Two bright stars
In a lonely sky
Together forever
Until they die.
©2003-2009 ~squantos
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:iconblood-doll:
awwwwwwww thats so sweet!!!!!!! i luv it!!
:iconsoulsongs:
This poem flows so well! Great job!
:icondreamlove:
Its true and flows together. Good job Matt.
:iconluze:
that's beautiful, and somehow very idealistic. actually i really like that. the pessimistic realist in me calls though that stars also die and implode one day and maybe become to horrible black holes. ah well, bad experiences with love ^^;
:iconsquantos:
Aww thanks for the comment luze. Yea I think alot of people have had bad experiences with love.. but shit happens.. ya know.
:icondiscontentbeauty:
*sigh*
This is beautiful. It brought tears. Everything flows very nicely.

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:iconkaedox:
I love this poem.... It makes me want to go find my boyfriend and hug him till he can't breath >.<

But great poem.

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What are you looking at? O.o
:iconfiom:
really nice one. :)
:icongreeneyedmoment:
aah love, sweet love..fave:D

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~May the moon and the stars shine upon you~
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